Click on this George to got to a site about a successful immigrant. Read what his life was like before and how moving to Australia has affected him. Why has it been good for him? How has Australia benefitted from his arrival? Blog on this.
I think that the australian pledge means that their is no wrong or right because you have your own beliefs to share with others thank you for reading this comment. :I
George had to wait a long time in a refugee Camp in Guinea because in Africa it was to dangerous so they are trying to get into Australia for saftey and to live a happy life. By Blake and Amelia!
I need to watch my own spelling as I wrote got instead of go! Sorry.
Josh, names of countries or places start with an uppercase letter. I think you can write more than that if you read it all.
John, You have posted in the wrong place! Australian begins with a capital. Did you mean to use their or there? Read the pledge again... I think there is a message you are missing.
Harry, Which to did you mean to use? To or too? Dangerous is spelt wrong. How did it become too dangerous in his country? The comment does not make a lot of sense.
Lillian: What you wrote is true. Grammar " in a Guinea". Australia has a capital A. How is he happy? What opportunities are there for him? Has he contributed to Australian society?
Blake and Amelia. Okay. Difference between to and too? You wrote "are trying" but they are already here! Check your spelling of safety. In what way has his life become better by moving to Australia?
George had to wait a long time in a refugee camp in guinea and is lucky to now be able to have a good life in Australia
ReplyDeleteI think that the australian pledge means that their is no wrong or right because you have your own beliefs to share with others thank you for reading this comment. :I
ReplyDeleteGeorge had a hard life but util it got to dangeruas they moved to Australia to have a happy and safe life.
ReplyDeleteGeorge had a hard life in Guinea refugee camp. He is now living in australia and he is safe and really happy.
ReplyDeleteGeorge had to wait a long time in a refugee Camp in Guinea because in Africa it was to dangerous so they are trying to get into Australia for saftey and to live a happy life.
ReplyDeleteBy Blake and Amelia!
I need to watch my own spelling as I wrote got instead of go! Sorry.
ReplyDeleteJosh, names of countries or places start with an uppercase letter. I think you can write more than that if you read it all.
John, You have posted in the wrong place! Australian begins with a capital. Did you mean to use their or there? Read the pledge again... I think there is a message you are missing.
Harry, Which to did you mean to use? To or too? Dangerous is spelt wrong. How did it become too dangerous in his country? The comment does not make a lot of sense.
Lillian: What you wrote is true. Grammar " in a Guinea". Australia has a capital A. How is he happy? What opportunities are there for him? Has he contributed to Australian society?
Blake and Amelia. Okay. Difference between to and too? You wrote "are trying" but they are already here! Check your spelling of safety. In what way has his life become better by moving to Australia?
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